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The Return of Owen


YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR

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This is a prequel to this story.

 

Armored Core: The Return of Owen

Disclaimer; they don't own any armored core, I do.

 

Chapter 1: The Default Chapter

 

A black and purple AC is seen watching over a burning textile factory. It was a turban factory that acted as a front for a terrorist cell of AC pilots, or as they prefer to be called, Ravens.

 

Pilot Rank: A-1

Pilot Name: Raor Stones

AC Name: Bong

A new comer who rose through the ranks rapidly. Some say he is invincible. He is like a steel clam: cool, emotionless, and ruthlessly trapping his victims and turning them into profit. He wears the emblem of the Cold Blood unit still.

 

Pilot Rank: S-1

Pilot Name: Lukav Mineav Sr.

AC Name: Moonscraper

The former head of the former Cold Blood unit when it existed, and the top ranked raven. He is waiting in the forefront to see what Raor can really do.

 

Pilot Rank: A-1A

Pilot Name: TM

AC Name: Thor's Colon

A not-really impressive rookie who took control of the kai arena as fast as anyone before him. Some say he is indestructible. There are whispers that he has also never been in a real AC fight, just praying on weak targets. He is not from the Cold Blood unit.

 

At mission site Armored Turban Textile Factory:

 

Raor Stones: mission complete

Sara: good work raor

Raor: yes I know

Sara: yes you are very funny as well

Raor: rageface

Sara: Return to base

 

Back at a hangar in Layered:

 

Lukav: has he returned yet?

TM: not yet

Lukav: face him to the death and test his skills

TM: okay

Lukav: RAVEN

TM: I will get my AC ready

Lukav: yes

 

At Raor's hangar in Layered:

 

Sara: your AC didn't take much damage

Raor: yes that is good

Sara: you are getting better

Raor: yes

Sara: if someone attacks us now you should be ready for them

Raor: I believe so yes

AC voice: All systems online

Raor: an enemy is here?

Sara: destroy your enemy

Raor: okay

AC voice: AC detected, pilot name: TM, AC Name: Thor's Colon

Raor: heh, I will slay his colon

Sara: yes slay his colon

TM slashes at Raor but Raor boosts over it

Raor: too slow

TM: you are not supposed to dodge people don't dodge in kai arena

Raor: this is not kai

Raor plunges his sword into TM's head and TM explodes

Sara: His colon is maxed, return to base

Raor: we are in the base

Sara: yes

Raor: we need to find out who sent him

Sara: I found out who already, it was Lukav

Raor: Lukav? It must finally be time…

 

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Chapter 2: Duel in the Desert

 

Pilot Rank: L-1

Pilot Name: LCC

AC Name: Joel

The most powerful Canadian Raven. Some say he is undefeatable. He fought in the kai arena before entering the Canada arena. He is a friend.

 

Pilot Rank: O-1

Pilot Name: AJ Raven

AC Name: Clockwork Elf 5

A mysterious Raven from an unknown land. Some say he is unknowable. He has been seen in many places but he is hard to find. He is looking for his greatest rival.

 

Pilot Rank: P-1

Pilot Name: Omega Pendragon

AC Name: Crying Game

A former member of the Cold Blood unit. Some say he is unreasonable. He is loyal to Lukav still.

 

At Raor’s hangar in Layered, after maxing TM out:

 

Sara: what will you do

Raor: I pray for answer

Sara: Cold Blood

Raor: yes

Sara: incoming new mission to destroy underwater turban factory

Raor: I have justice

Sara: yes

Raor: mission accepted

Somewhere else in Layered:

Lukav: We shall proceed

Omega Pendragon: Shall I go?

Lukav: yes

Omega Pendragon: I am eager to see Raor again

Lukav: interrupt his mission and kill him

Omega Pendragon: robots

 

At mission site underwater turban base:

 

Raor: I am here

Sara: begin mission

Raor: I hate turbans

Sara: yes

AC voice: AC detected, pilot name: AJ Raven, AC name: Clockwork Elf 5

Raor: what are you doing here?

AJ: I am looking for my rival

AJ fires his rifle and Raor takes cover behind a pile of turbans

Sara: are you okay?

Raor: I am fine he is crazy but not smart or good

Sara: he should be easy to kill alone

AC voice: AC detected, pilot name: Omega Pendragon, AC name: Crying Game

Raor: I knew you would show up

OP: I miss you come back

Raor: NEVER

OP: PONIES NOOOOOO

OP fires his flame thrower at the pile of turbans

Raor: 2 vs 1

AC voice: AC detected, pilot name: LCC, AC name: Joel

LCC: I am the LCC

Raor: biblioteca

Raor fires missiles all over OP’s face and explodes him

OP: RAOR NOOOOOOoooooo

Raor: whining to the end

AJ: the fight is not over I have alien cannon overed weapon

Raor: I will kill you and your aliens

AJ: my aliens will kill you

Raor rips AJ Raven’s head off

Sara: good work destroy the factory and return to base

Raor: yes

Raor destroys the factory

 

Back at Raor’s hangar in Layered:

 

Raor: that was scary

Sara: not really they were weak

Raor: this is true

Lukav (on radio): this is Lukav now is the time

Raor: Cold Blood

Lukav: we shall meet the plan is in motion

Raor: what plan?

Lukav: I will tell you in the jungle meet me there

Raor: I will go to the jungle

Lukav: yes

Sara: you must go to the jungle

LCC: FRIEND

 

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Chapter 3: Archrivals

 

Pilot Rank: L-1

Pilot Name: Lord Secret

AC Name: Mew

The raven with the most secrets. Some say he is unbelievable. He is still in Cold Blood, but noone knows why. It is a secret.

 

Pilot Rank: J-1

Pilot Name: Ninety

AC Name: Tattoo Owner

A young raven who runs a bar. Some say he is uncanny. He runs a bar for Ravens. He doesn't actually participate in Raven missions or arena battles, but he has an AC anyways.

 

In Raor's hangar in Layered:

 

Raor: I think I need a drink.

Sara: Maybe you should go visit Ninety's bar

Raor: yes

Sara: I will prepare your AC for the jungle

 

In Ninety's bar in Layered:

 

90: hello lets talk about guns and sandwiches

Raor: okay

90: I hear lukav is looking for you

Raor: yes

90: he is the most powerful raven

Raor: he is garbage I will slay him for bothering me

90: I wonder if it will be that easy

Raor: it will be that easy

90: what about Cold Blood

Raor: they are my old unit

90: you have killed most of them already

Raor: the strongest are still left hopefully i don't face them

90: are you afraid

Raor: no but i dont want my time wasted anymore lukav's missions don't pay

90: oh that is no good

Raor: its bullshit

Sara: raor i found you, lord secret wishes to speak to you

Raor: why is he here?

Sara: he said its a secret

Raor: lets go

 

Back at Raor's hanger:

 

LS: it is I lord secret

Raor: what is it?

LS: I have come to challenge you

Raor: why?

LS: it is a secret

Raor: cold blood

LS: let us face off in the abandoned pokemon arena

Raor: fine

LS: can we talk about pokemon

Raor: no leave

LS: okay

90: I overheard the conversation sounds like a trap i will go with you

Raor: you dont know how to pilot an AC

90: but I have one anyways

 

On the way to the abandoned pokemon arena:

 

Sara: I don't trust Ninety I think this is a set up

Raor: I agree I will kill them both to be safe

Sara: what if he is not a traitor

Raor: i saw a turban in his back pocket he has a vendetta

Sara: muslim sympathizer

Raor: traitor or not he must die

 

At the abandoned pokemon arena:

 

Raor: I am here time to die

LS: Mew I choose you!

LS's AC overboosts across the map and fires a bazooka at Raor. Raor side steps the shell and cuts the bazooka in two

LS: A critical hit!

Raor: stop talking like that!

Raor kicks LS in the chest and LS falls onto his back. Raor shoots his rifle into his face and chest repeatedly

LS: It's super effective!

Raor: justice!

Raor kicks LS's head clean off and then his AC explodes

Ninety: oh no! Cold Blood!

Raor: I knew you were a traitor

Raor drives his sword straight through Ninety's head

90: How?

Raor: traitors wear turbans

90 explodes

Lukav: splendid you are as strong as ever

Raor: come out so I can kill you

Lukav: I still have 1 more card to play

Raor: exo team

Lukav: they are the most powerful

Raor: we shall see

Lukav: meet me in our old meeting place

Raor: cold blood

Lukav: for answer

 

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Chapter 4: Great Pleasure

 

Pilot Rank: X-1

Pilot Name: Exogen

AC Name: Inception

The last surviving member of Cold Blood unit aside from Lukav. Some say he is undecipherable. He is looking to battle in any way he can even if noone else wants to battle anymore, or if a battle never even started. Everything is subjective. He is one half of exo team, the most powerful team in the Cold Blood unit.

 

Pilot Rank: X-2

Pilot Name: Exorcet

AC Name: Matrix

The last surviving member of Cold Blood unit aside from Lukav and exogen. Some say he is unflappable. He enjoys looking at planes and playing simulations of planes. He is one half of exo team, the most powerful team in the Cold Blood unit.

 

In Raor's hangar, in Layered:

 

Sara: I think finally we will get answers

RS: I pray for answer

Sara: but exo team is strong

RS: cold blood

Sara: you can win you are the strongest

RS: they will die

Sara: yes

 

In the Zearm Desert

 

Lukav and team exo stand together in the night

 

Lukav: the story ends now

Exogen: subjectivism

Exorcet: I like planes

Lukav: destroy him here I must know if he is the strongest now

Exogen: brain in a vat

Exorcet: I like planes

Lukav: he is here I will hide until the fight is over

Raor arrives on the battlefield

Raor: come back here so i can kill you

Lukav: you must defeat the strongest team in Cold Blood first

Raor: they are no match for me

Exorcet fires his laser rifle and Raor dodges, while Exogen overboosts straight at him

Exogen: cqc

Raor: fine by me

Exogen tries to get behind Raor, but noone gets behind Raor

Sara: noone gets behind Raor

Exogen: relativism?

Raor: die scum!

Raor grabs Exogen by the throat and slams every missile he has into his AC. All that is left is the piece of his throat in his hand

Sara: that was overkill

Raor: he talks too much now he will never talk again

Exorcet: I like planes!

Raor overboosts at Exorcet and chops him in half with his sword

Raor: you are the only person I killed that I actually liked

Exorcet: I...like...planes...

Raor: nooooooo

Exorcet explodes

Raor: single tear

 

Lukav finally comes out from behind a rock

 

Raor: we finally meet

Lukav: Cold Blood

Raor: what is your plan?

Lukav: to test your power by having you kill all my men, then having you join me to rule the world

Raor: your plan makes no sense why would you sacrifice all your men?

Lukav: because you are the best

Raor: I am the machine

Lukav: let's sacrifice my son in a few years too

Raor: okay

 

Pilot Rank: S-1

Pilot Name: Raor Stones

AC Name: Bong

The pilot who defeated nine-ball, said by some to be just lucky, others say invincable. He seems emotionless in battle, ruthlessly hunting his opponents until their destruction. The emblem he carries is from his days in the military, a progetech special forces group Cold Blood. He is the last living member of his squad. Many have threatened his crown as Nine-Breaker but none have sucseeded. But this is a new era. Nine-ball is long dead, but Stones lives on. Always training to be better and always on the look out for new technology. He doesn't plan to lose.

 

FIN

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"Sara: His colon is maxed, return to base"

 

I love it.

 

You know, I have a unfinished, serious fan-fiction myself that uses a similar style. After my first one that I never finished, I got tired of having to use "Blah," he said. Then he said... Said said said. over and over. I prefer the script style when it comes to writing.

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Yeah I find that writing in a kind of movie script form seems easier to me as well, I think because you get to ignore a bunch of stuff and writing conventions like pacing and plot structure don't matter as much. Writing in a novel form has so many conventions that need to be addressed for it to make sense. Fuck all that.

 

I actually have tried to write a fanfic in normal novel form and I just couldn't do it. I got bored of it within like two pages. Ideas are more fun than writing stories unless it's a fast-hitting movie-script style Epic like I'm trying to write here. Directed by Michael Bay.

 

I'm trying to get John to draw this for me.

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