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Enter the Raven


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After Reading PD's "The Return of Owen" I was greatly inspired to try my hand at the art of fan-fic writing. I came up with a premise that takes place after both PD's story and Lukav's story. This takes place about a year after the end of Lukav's fan-fic where *SPOILERS* Raor ends up defeating Lukav Jr. and Sr. and establishing reign over a new controller.

 

Link to PD's "The Return of Owen" which also links to the original "Fate of the Ninebrakers".

http://armoredcoreun...topic=2405&st=0

 

I must be honest, after coming up with the story, I started writing and I realized it was turning out to be a little more difficult than I previously thought it would. So much respect goes out to the valiant efforts of the previous two authors! I'm not sure if I will be able to write any more chapters in the near future (I have so much more planned in my head!) , but here is chapter 1 of "Enter the Raven". I am hoping this will be found enjoyable and appetite the thirsts of many as noob works diligently on the fine comic strips for PD's "The Return of Owen". But this one mainly goes out to PD for his outstanding story. Well enough talk, enjoy.

 

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Armored Core: Enter the Raven

Disclaimer: No one owns any Armored Core, it’s pure subjectivism.

 

Chapter 1: Familiar Faces, Aging Pasts

 

Aboard a large ocean carrier, many Ravens are destined to test their skills in an upcoming tournament which will decide the fates of those who believe themselves to be the best. Pilots from all corners of the globe are gathering for a special event hosted by the infamous Raor Stones. Meanwhile a pilot by the name of Penguin Deus is embarking on this journey with an agenda that goes beyond prestige…

 

Pilot Name: Penguin Deus

AC Name: Demon Eyes

One of the most revered pilots in the Raven world, he has recently come out of retirement to participate in the world tournament. He has many battles under his belt and has proved many times what it means to be a top ranked contender in the Arena. Known for his calm and cool demeanor, he has garnered a devoted following over the years.

Upon returning to the active Raven fold, Penguin Deus donned the Avenger Face as his emblem. Some believe it symbolizes the burning desire for vengeance he feels after the untimely death of his long-time friend TM.

 

Penguin Deus sits upon the upper deck and observes two young men trolling about the ship in an effort to outdo each other. One is wearing a gasmask and the other is sporting a mid-length haircut and a leather jacket. Their names are Magnus and Altaire, two rival pilots engaged in an endless conflict.

 

Pilot Name: Altaire

AC Name: Ego Trip

A Raven who derives great pleasure in making newer pilots suffer. Considers himself to be amazing, he is known for his antagonistic personality. Claims to have trolled Magnus.

 

Pilot Name: Magnus

AC Name: Ink Blotch

A pilot whose identity remains a mystery. Some say he is untrollable, although Altaire disagrees. Having never been seen without his gasmask he revels in his obscurity.

 

Altaire is making his route causing civil unrest and boasting to anyone in his path.

He then notices a man staring at the sea who pays no attention to his antics.

Altaire: Who does this guy think he is?! Has he truly not noticed my greatness?

 

Pilot Name: Taurus

AC Name: Handsome Man

A humble pilot of eastern origin, he has a deep understanding of all things. He loves gazing up at the stars in the night sky. How deep is his love? Many would like to know.

 

Altaire: What’s your style?

Taurus takes a moment before replying, staring off into the sea.

Taurus: The art of trolling, without trolling.

Altaire: The art of trolling, without trolling, what the fuck is that?! Show me some of it.

Taurus: I just did, now go.

The crowd begins to laugh and jeer at Altaire, stirring him into a frenzy.

Altaire: Wait, what? You clearly did not troll me, any fucking retard could tell you that.

Taurus: Crowd has spoken, now get out myface.

Just as Altaire was about to respond, sandwiches from the crowd began to fly in his direction forcing him to duck down and take shelter within the bowels of the ship.

PD observed the whole scene and a smile lit across his face.

PD: That’s definitely my man.

He starts towards Taurus’s table.

PD: That was smooth.

Taurus: Yes I know.

PD: Mind if I have a seat?

Taurus: Yes no problem, we will do chat together.

PD and Taurus take a quick glance around as if to make sure no one was listening in.

PD: So tell me what you know of the man who runs this tournament.

Taurus: Raor runs secret operation under disguise of world tournament.

PD: Cold Blood.

Taurus: Yes. I have proof he is funneling corporate funds by manipulating the controller.

PD: Corporate greed.

Taurus: Yes, absolute power.

PD: The Power Elite must be taken down, show me the documents.

Taurus: Yes of course, I send to your PDA.

PD: Thanks Taurus, you are a great friend.

Taurus: Pleasure is mine.

Taurus winks at PD

PD clicks his tongue and shoots an imaginary bullet at Taurus with his index finger.

Taurus catches the bullet, anchors it above his mouth and drops it, then proceeds to rub his stomach, nodding his head with a sly smile.

PD: Pax dude.

Taurus: C’ya round homie.

 

Penguin Deus Heads down into the ship to his private quarters. He locks his door and takes a seat on a luxurious mattress, he then proceeds to whip out his PDA and access his mail. He identifies Taurus’s message and opens it.

 

PD: Good man, lets see what we’ve got here…

 

Subject: Raor and corrupt power in Layered.

Sender: Taurus

Due to inside info from friends, internal cyber detectives Niji and LCC, I have reason to know Raor is behind political and social unrest in Layered. As you know, one years ago, controller was destroyed. It was work of Raor and Lukav Sr. Lukav planned control of new controller, Raor betrayed Lukav and now Raor owns controller. He manipulates Layered and corporate balance to benefit himself and furthers his control. This secret info only known by select few, be on your guard friend. I hope you have maintained your piloting skills over the years of your absence, these are dangerous grounds we tread on Raven. When be in touch once we reach the tournament. Until then, TADAA-DILDO~~

 

P.S. I know true reason you are among us Ravens once again. Raor Stones is responsible for the death of TM, I’m sure that provides enough motive for you to carry out your mission. Also do you know the name Lionheart, he seems to be working on Raor’s behalf as a bodyguard. He has also been involved in a number of Cold Blood operations in the past.

 

A file is attached to the message containing photographs, videos and sound bites of illegal transactions and other mischievous activities.

 

PD: Lionheart…

 

PD has a flashback from many years gone by, PD and TM just finished a mission in which they retrieved documents from an underground lab. Now they were heading off to their escape chopper hovering just in the distance. Just as the two AC’s were activating their overboost a large laser smashed into the back of TM’s AC stunning him. An enemy AC was seen up ahead.

 

Pilot Name: Raor Stones

AC Name: Bong

A leading member of the Cold Blood unit, he is quick to dominate any scenario. He is cold, ruthless and always has his eyes set on the highest profit.

 

PD: An ambush!

Raor Stones: Cold Blood will always come out on top!

TM: PD, he’s going for the chopper, you must stop him.

PD: But Owen…

TM: Go now!

PD over boosts to Raor’s location and they begin to trade shots.

Raor Stones: You are quite a capable pilot, your style is familiar. It can’t be, Penguin Dues?

PD: The one and only! Prepare to be toast.

Raor Stones: Keep in mind this isn’t the Arena, this is a whole new level of danger. Here I rule!!

PD: Save it Stones! I'm not to be trifled with.

 

As the two continue their battle, Penguin Deus is alerted by the presence of a second enemy AC far off a ways in TM‘s vicinity.

 

Pilot Name: Lionheart

AC Name: Eddie the Head

A ruthless pilot new to the Cold Blood unit, he is training under the supervision of Raor Stones.

 

Just when TM had begun to regain control of his AC, the second enemy AC began to creep up behind him.

 

PD: Owen! Behind you!

TM turns his head but it was already too late, Lionheart jumps on the back of TM’s AC and draws his blade.

Lionheart: PREPARE TO BE MAXED!

PD: NOOOOOOO!!!!!!

TM: UAAAAGHH…..AHHHHHHH..AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

PD could hear Owen’s cries rip through the harsh static of his receiver. PD’s face contorted in a display of extreme anguish as he was forced to listen, but there was nothing he could do to stop the horror. It seemed to last forever, echoing throughout his head.

 

Raor Stones: Lionheart, we’re finished here. Grab the documents and lets go.

Lionheart got up off of TM's devasted AC, and snatched the documents from his limp hand.

 

The two enemy AC’s activated their overboost and disappeared from the combat zone.

Penguin Deus helps hoist TM’s badly damaged AC onto the chopper, and the two pilots take off into the distant horizon. Not a word was spoken between the two of them, in fact this would be the last time the two would ever see or hear from each other ever again. One month after the incident Penguin Deus would retire from Raven life and about a year later he would hear of TM’s passing. A great void was left in the world of Ravens.

 

Back in present day, Penguin Deus sits on the edge of his bed holding his head in his hands. The soft patter of tears hit the hard floor surface and began to form a small pool. He slowly removes his hands from his face and looks up, not with an expression of sadness, but of sheer anger and determination.

 

PD: Raor… Lionheart, you will both pay dearly for what you have done! In the name of Owen, I will have my vengeance!

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a whole new level of danger!

 

PD could hear Owen’s cries rip through the harsh static of his receiver. PD’s face contorted in a display of extreme anguish as he was forced to listen, but there was nothing he could do to stop the horror. It seemed to last forever, echoing throughout his head.

 

Lionheart literally raped in on the field, huh? That's fantastic. AC porn. It was only a matter of time!

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a whole new level of danger!

 

Lionheart literally raped in on the field, huh?

For sure, nothing spells danger quite like rape. Stones was not kidding when he said Cold Blood will always come out on top, it's almost impossible to be ready for danger in its most radical form, anything could happen. "The Outlaw Josey Wales" came to mind when designing this scene, only this time around there was no hope for poor Owen.

 

Fantastic as always.

"Fate of the Ninebrakers" has opened new dimensions.

 

Is that mattress covered in real velour?

Why of course, only the best for a legendary Raven. It's too bad though that PD didn't get to enjoy the sheets more, he's got so much on his mind.

 

Thanks for the comments everyone, I might get cracking on the second chapter hopefully sooner than later. There is still so much more to be revealed!

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  • 4 months later...

Yeah, I've already got it planned out. As Raor and PD hinted at, a storm is a brewing. I will get cracking sometime within the month.

 

The next chapter involves drama that occurs during the tournaments qualifying rounds. Many trials await PD, both physically and mentally, will he be strong enough to endure the trials after years of retirement? Is he prepared to come face to face with demons of his past? Some say those with the eye's of a demon can see the truest shades of fate, has PD already seen his? Stay tuned to find out...

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