[Shattered Heaven Episode I: Sins of the Soul Release June 2011]

Like I said, I'm gonna buy a copy for sure. I have extra money laying around, so it's no big deal. I'll actually read it too. This recent stint on ACU has helped serve to remind exactly why I did make the site. It may not be the best reason to buy your book, but it'll be my reason.

Lmao. I'll take it! Hahaha

[AC3 chpter 1]

Well, it's nice to see more people wanting to write, but the first thing I'm noticing with all these new writers are their 5-8 sentenced "chapters". These don't really count as a "chapter". Nothing really happens, at least no where near enough for any reader to get drawn into the story. It just seems like you were narrating dialogue in your head as you were playing the game. You didn't introduce any real characters, no personalities, no environmental descriptions, it was more like a quick snippet of an event. I'm not trying to put you down, I'm giving you advice if you want people to read your story, and if you want to get better. I'll ignore grammar for now, because more importantly you'll have to work on plot development and story telling. First, chapters should include the following:Character developmentPlot advancementDescriptionsIt doesn't have to be ridiculously long, but long enough to explain an event crucial to the progression of the plot. You need to show character interactions to make the readers care about them, to get to know them. I would suggest looking at other stories to see how they're done in order to get an idea of what is a proper chapter length and how other authors develop their stories.

[SH Episode 1: Prologue]

I can't thank you enough for taking the time to post this here. Having high quality blogs like this is suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper awesome.<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

Wow, you're welcome ^^. I don't know about this being high quality, I still feel this one is the lowest quality out of the novels but still, I really appreciate the response. Easily made my day XD.