Thank you for the critique Mr. Penguin. I'll admit, I'm not satisfied, but I'm also not displeased since this is my first try in both graphic novel style and painting. I also agree that I need to expand into dynamic poses in my future trials. But it was also fun as hell since the style is rather challenging. I found only one book on graphic novel figure drawing in 3 book stores. In the future I'm looking into fusing Copic Markers, Watercolor and Gouache to give a more layered 3d feel to the shading. Heh, I realized in this commission how much I have to learn. Even joined my college's animator network so I can surround myself with potential rivals.