Terminator98 Posted June 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2010 The thing is, I have yet to figure out completely, the true meaning of Colon Maxing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR Posted June 4, 2010 Report Share Posted June 4, 2010 I definitely wouldn't mind seeing a colon maxing scene where me and PD face off, Mano-a-Mano. Would a colon maxing battle really be mano-a-mano? Hmmmm...a question for the ages. Colon maxing = hardcore anal sex, basically. It means you dominated someone, usually. Or I guess it could mean you literally just had rough anal with 'em. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terminator98 Posted June 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2010 Eh... No Hentai in here. I'm a sensible spirit. Maybe when I get more perversed.Some Yaoi is still possible though... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR Posted June 4, 2010 Report Share Posted June 4, 2010 Nah we're kidding. I don't actually want to read about that in your story, hahaha. I just want AC fanfic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Knight Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 Originally I was going to write up a serious review/critique. But with all this talk of anal raping it seems I've lost my moment of seriousness. That being said, it needs more PD. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 Nothing is as serious as anal rape, son. But yeah he was writing it seriously, don't mind us and our tomfoolery, haha. Hook him up with reviews, critiquing by another writer would probably be a good thing for him. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terminator98 Posted June 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 Nothing is as serious as anal rape, son. The level of seriousness is so serious that in falls in none existence. But yeah he was writing it seriously, don't mind us and our tomfoolery, haha. Hook him up with reviews, critiquing by another writer would probably be a good thing for him. Originally I was going to write up a serious review/critique. Yes, please do. I need some reviews... Need to perfect my english (I'm not an english speaking native) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Knight Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 Anyway, I was joking haha. I'll be generic since there's only 2 chapters so far. First off, for not being your primary language this is really well, I would never had guessed that was the case. Writing in first person is a challenge in it of itself, not many people can pull off something constantly engaging with first person. Depending on how you write it you can limit the reader to only really know one character. I'm not saying that's the case here, but it's one of the drawbacks and risks of first person. It also depends on the type of story you want to present, if you want it to solely focus on the protagonist and only have the reader see into his/her mind than that's not really a big issue. Either way, so far, the way you're presenting the story is good. I'm not going to go into stylistic properties or anything like that right now, again since it's only 2 chapters. Story and plot wise, it's already unique since you're not having the protagonist start off as the highly skilled hero. You've managed to capture an audience which is what writers want/need to do. Having cameos is always a plus too, because it makes it that more appealing and gives it a community feel. That being said it's off to a very good start. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taurus Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 have any LYNX (or NEXT) in the future? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terminator98 Posted June 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 have any LYNX (or NEXT) in the future? Maybe. If you read chapter 1 carefully, there's a small detail that might point towards the apparition of at least ONE NEXT. Of course, that's MAYBE. Chapter 3 is up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 (edited) Oh cool I'll read it now! screw nexts AC4 is not AC. I don't use dingo2? What's my bot like in your story? Or is that something I gotta wait to see? Edited June 7, 2010 by Colon Mokto Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Ocelot Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 Nice, simply nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harakiri Tiger Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 I have featured the article so it's at the top of the list. I'll get to reading chapter 3 later on tonight. Hope that featuring helps your hits a bit! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terminator98 Posted June 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 (edited) Oh cool I'll read it now! screw nexts AC4 is not AC. I don't use dingo2? What's my bot like in your story? Or is that something I gotta wait to see? most of the returning cast have got the same AC they had in "Lost Chronicles". You're one exception... Hint: Not a NEXT, but AALIYAH. I'll make a character sheet soon enough.I've currently borrowed my PS2 to someone else, thus why I didn't show any designs or do a character sheet. edit: P.S: Thanks a lot Niji for the help. Instill have to sort out how to properly put the chapters in scrolling down order, from first to last. For now, I'm putting in false dates... XD Edited June 8, 2010 by Terminator98 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 oh okay. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shirtless Crackhead Posted June 9, 2010 Report Share Posted June 9, 2010 New idea, if people on here are going to submit their names for characters for the fan-fic, they must participate in the Alignment topic and/or submit a possible AC design. PS2 era games, doesn't have to make an actually good AC, just mechanically how you'd like it to work. I've actually been dicking around on LR because I lost my SL file *epic sad face*. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 So I was thinking, if I'm like Berlioz and this is LR, I'd have to be in a quad huh? rs+hp and gl ftw? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terminator98 Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 we're in a world where REMORA works surprisingly well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taurus Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 we're in a world where REMORA works surprisingly well. actually, everything in fanart or fanfic are works well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 What part was remora again? The extension hover boosters? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taurus Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 REMORA = multi-booster. (but just for up, down, and front direction) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taurus Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 btw, retro AC with REMORA can do the thing that NEXT can't. it is up-and-down QB. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 In his fan fic, maybe. Not in LR, hahaha. Remora was awful. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taurus Posted June 11, 2010 Report Share Posted June 11, 2010 true. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 (edited) I'm kind of eager to see my bot, now. Remora and back cannons with no PLUS? Color me intrigued! The no dingo2 thing is also sorta strange. Those are like the most agile midweights in the game by far, and I thought Aaliyah was an agile midweight type of frame? Edited June 18, 2010 by Colon Mokto Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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