Fragrant Posted October 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2011 Jackson Lacey: Yeah, she is going for a field goal. lol Thanks for the watch out, I don't know how I missed throught. It should be through out. :{ ++++++ Almost finished with page 10, just lacking backgrounds. http://i.imgur.com/3T9jo.png Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragrant Posted October 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 (edited) Last page from yesterday was 12, I didn't get a chance to work on it more today, so I'll post it now with some text. I don't think I can post the final, 100% versions anyway till a certain time. http://i.imgur.com/urMMZ.png EDIT: Pages 13-15. In various stages of progress for the art. I might rearrange the dialogue later. http://i.imgur.com/OzpiY.png http://i.imgur.com/bEGgU.png http://i.imgur.com/nzjHl.png The sword is suppose to be a heavy curser and originally I was gonna use #%$#$% in place of curse words, but instead settled for gibberish words instead of the sensored text $%#$%#, lol. I must make it, before the 31st! :{ I think I might make it, two pages left after this. Going over all of them afterwards to add backgrounds, missing details, and so on. http://i.imgur.com/vN6s4.png http://i.imgur.com/cmsEO.png I had three ending paths to choose from, the path where the monkey saves them, and the path were it turns out to be a video game being played by some people. The latter would have been mind blowing, but I chose the "parody paradox" path. :{ Or is it satire, anyways, hows it turning out? Were some of the jokes hit or miss? EDIT2: Pages 18-20 w.i.p..{21 pages total, with there being a page 0, so these are really 19-21.} http://i.imgur.com/dUwZn.png http://i.imgur.com/wUDY7.png http://i.imgur.com/bpbHr.png What do you think of the ending? Is it mind-boggling? Random? Funny? D: I don't think I can post the pages with finished art until after the competition is over. So I didn't post the final page with lineart. Is it clear what is going on in the last panel. Do you see the realistic depiction of a bee and a lobster? I went for that instead of showing toon people kissing for humorous effect. Edited October 28, 2011 by Fragrant Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragrant Posted November 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 I'm not sure how to link individually from photoshop.com, so I'll post a link to a gallery of some drawings I had. There are some notes in there relating to the comic as well. Imgur has some policy about deleting stuff after 6 months or something so I'd rather upload somewhere more permanent. : X http://www.photoshop.com/users/Fulgrate/albums/d89668548b044bf5bdc4b9f8e319a078 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragrant Posted November 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 (edited) Okay, I think I managed to figure out how to post images from photoshop.com, kind of primitive though, you'd think they'd have the auto-paste thing that imgur and other sites have. http://api.photoshop.com/v1.0/accounts/58b333c444514870ad19b5d2225dee4f/assets/80d43ba77c244de6bae8eacfa803f852/renditions/1024.jpg?md=1320686386000 http://api.photoshop.com/v1.0/accounts/58b333c444514870ad19b5d2225dee4f/assets/4bc24fed079d46349c297790b0fc83b3/renditions/1024.jpg?md=1320686392000 Even though in game, the knight is wearing the silver knight armor, my mind turns it into that while I'm playing, the way it really looks is still awesome, but I like this style better. The princess is almost perfect, even the dress, except I would wish that the color was pickable. Egg yellow is okay, but not what I wanted on my princess character. Edited November 7, 2011 by Fragrant Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragrant Posted November 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 I'm working on another comic, this time for web comic distribution and related formats. The intro has the same dialogue {same world}, so I used a modified version of page 001 of the other art, showing a different view of that scene. http://i.imgur.com/XXHDS.png Page 2, work in progress:http://i.imgur.com/1PJS4.png Page 3, w.i.p.http://i.imgur.com/JeJWk.png Page 4, w.i.p.http://i.imgur.com/I2jhO.png This time, I'm putting some soul power into this, unlike the failed webcomic from months ago, so directionless! Does this seem to have good potential? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Talentless Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 Yes. So long as you keep at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragrant Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 (edited) I see, thanks. ++++++ This page is done I guess, I was gonna write the in title in katakana form top to bottom next to the U in Ultranimal and it would read U-ru-ta-a-ni-mu, but then I thought it would appear too small and unreadable, so I guess if I redo that part of the page in a major way to make room for it. Then again, I might just simply do it later.[hide]http://i.imgur.com/KPJDV.png[/hide] EDIT: Now its done. Is the japanese right? Its suppose to say Ultranimu instead of Ultranimal though for the katakana, lol. http://api.photoshop.com/v1.0/accounts/58b333c444514870ad19b5d2225dee4f/assets/54db778bc8214b10a4ea87f4d068bdb3/renditions/1024.jpg?md=1321145738000 Anybody seen Sacred Seven? http://api.photoshop.com/v1.0/accounts/58b333c444514870ad19b5d2225dee4f/assets/e1ec20b4796b4d07a7a2331a51ba3f9c/renditions/1024.jpg?md=1321205575000 Edited November 13, 2011 by Fragrant Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragrant Posted November 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2011 Here is a link to the web comic: Ultranimal. http://www.drunkduck.com/Ultranimu/5366100/ I gotta upload page 3 soon, here's page 5 w.i.p.{Just needs dialogue added.} http://i.imgur.com/UDTPA.png Here's a page that is way ahead of that point. It's from around the time the nin's introduced.http://i.imgur.com/HE2L8.png Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragrant Posted November 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2011 I tried drawing Piera in a style that is seen in some anime's/mangas.http://i.imgur.com/jYUZE.png New pages, various stages of work: http://i.imgur.com/Q7wAz.png http://i.imgur.com/jkZ4N.png http://i.imgur.com/2QWkY.png Page 10 is the punchline. D: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Talentless Posted November 30, 2011 Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 Transition from page ten to eleven confused my at first. Also, is that Piera transforming and attacking Omer?I also liked Piera's face in the concept art up above than the finished picture. Looks like shes terrified in the finished one.Beyond that, fun to read. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragrant Posted November 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 (edited) Yeah, Piera is working for a villain who gave her a power up that is dark in nature. Yeah, I changed her facial expression because I wanted it to look more like she got startled than just simply looking to the side, lol. She'll probably use that other face some other time. If you don't mind spoilers, here are some pics of stuff that happens later. I uploaded the many notes that have still to see the light of day, I usually just sit on these for weeks since I tell myself not to upload anything that isn't at least inked. http://www.photoshop...2366b47fb5960fa The pictures showing a scientist in front of numbered canisters and robots fighting ultranimals are from the story that has to do with the fighting dragon. The scientist is trying to purge the planet of super villains by sending them a robot that defies the limits of nature the way they do. The robots that fail send him data that allows him to make stronger robots until it gets to the point where villains and heroes have to make temporary alliances in order to standing a chance of fighting them. Sometimes when I don't have my sketchbook or a folder with paper near me, I usually end up using scrap pieces of paper. The intro to the present comic I'm working on was done on such a piece. http://api.photoshop...d=1322493082000 Here is a scrap sheet showing a scene I have YET to ink. {It's in the later 20s, which would put it beyond the end of this chapter.} http://www.photoshop...5fdccae08eb54b3 Then when I get it to the sketchbook, looks like this:{ignore the skunk note, it was there before, but I needed to use all the space in the sketchbook since I'm running out.} http://www.photoshop...69a89f36f2d0600 And some random notes relating to that chaper:http://api.photoshop...d=1322493072000 Becomes this:http://api.photoshop...d=1322493688000 From the little scribble showing a knight and lady dragon on that scrap was so that I remembered the origin of the Dragon knights that guard the Princess's portion of the castle. They are what guard her until she is appointed a "real knight". The part after that shows Piera's mother, who senses her daughter's distress from light years away. She is very powerful, in this scene, she is actually fighting in the vacuum of space alongside a knightess of hers against a really powerful super villain.{Their talking telepathically, since theres no air in space. Also, that sphere in the back is suppose to be a planet.{My sketches are always so rough.} http://api.photoshop.com/v1.0/accounts/58b333c444514870ad19b5d2225dee4f/assets/f626a5fdaa39449a8eada327b5fe05ca/renditions/1024.jpg?md=1322493026000 Piera talking to her father in this scene, he is usually fighting against super villains out on another planet just like the Queen. http://api.photoshop.com/v1.0/accounts/58b333c444514870ad19b5d2225dee4f/assets/319703e09204444d8efd4c005a847e5d/renditions/1024.jpg?md=1322492970000 This guy is the leader of a group of dragons. http://api.photoshop.com/v1.0/accounts/58b333c444514870ad19b5d2225dee4f/assets/9f9013f1da4847c2acef85bde303f2cc/renditions/1024.jpg?md=1322493002000 Also, Ninja and Flower Princess. http://i.imgur.com/bVi7Z.png Edited November 30, 2011 by Fragrant Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ataraxis Posted November 30, 2011 Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 I'd be pretty happy if my sketches were only that "rough." I like that you just gave us a deeper look at the whole process you go through for all this. Neat stuff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shirtless Crackhead Posted November 30, 2011 Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 Good work bro. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragrant Posted December 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2011 Ataraxis and Egnaciouis: Thanks! ++++++ New art. Pages 14, 15, and 16 in various stages of progress. http://i.imgur.com/t9JUl.png http://i.imgur.com/yHRvs.png http://i.imgur.com/I6kr1.png Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shirtless Crackhead Posted December 1, 2011 Report Share Posted December 1, 2011 Why is that last one so light? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragrant Posted December 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2011 ^^^ Just the roughdraft, before I do the inking. The page before it had its rough draft lines erased and I was over halfway done with the inking. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shirtless Crackhead Posted December 1, 2011 Report Share Posted December 1, 2011 Well, it's really hard to see. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragrant Posted December 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2011 Yeah, I keep telling myself to use a darker grey, for it does become hard to see when trying to ink sometimes. No new art. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shirtless Crackhead Posted December 3, 2011 Report Share Posted December 3, 2011 Just post after doing the inking, problem solved. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragrant Posted December 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2011 (edited) ^^^ Sometimes I like to post my w.i.p. to get opinions on how scenes are before their inked, and somtimes to compare how much a scene changed from the rought draft to inked and so on. I use to just post inked before. ++++++ Page 15. http://i.imgur.com/DiQHX.png Edited December 4, 2011 by Fragrant Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shirtless Crackhead Posted December 4, 2011 Report Share Posted December 4, 2011 Fair enough. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fragrant Posted December 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2011 ^^^I see. +++++ Page 016. http://i.imgur.com/9bSbC.png Some notes. http://api.photoshop.com/v1.0/accounts/58b333c444514870ad19b5d2225dee4f/assets/18b63b1b502649c1a5869dd993e4713c/renditions/1024.jpg?md=1322960322000 Ninja offensive techniques:http://api.photoshop.com/v1.0/accounts/58b333c444514870ad19b5d2225dee4f/assets/d2115f320a1943fe933a5d9db42f1f7f/renditions/1024.jpg?md=1322960312000 Knight and dragon: http://api.photoshop.com/v1.0/accounts/58b333c444514870ad19b5d2225dee4f/assets/bdfbc5eacf654666a70452832fdf5e8e/renditions/1024.jpg?md=1322960302000 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shirtless Crackhead Posted December 6, 2011 Report Share Posted December 6, 2011 I always notice that alot of artists draw characters in a particular style. I was wondering what you could tell me about, as far as the why. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR Posted December 6, 2011 Report Share Posted December 6, 2011 You should try making a dark souls comic. I kinda want to do that as well, so I might! It won't look nearly as spiffy as yours though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shirtless Crackhead Posted December 6, 2011 Report Share Posted December 6, 2011 You should write a DS fanfic about trolling noobs. Then commission him to draw the comic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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