Some game I made, AC meets DS

[Nomrah]

I like Ritrika in that last one, nicely done with good perspective.

[YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR]

ya the ritrika is on point tho, and i mean the nor's look is fine aside from the face

[Fragrant]

Nomrah: True, I was confident with her design, so I had her doing a pose since she's easy to draw even if I'm tired.

 

Tank Top Legend: Thanks, Ritrika is easy, but I guess because I know her design is final, while I still have doubts about Phreit Nors, so I end up messing up sometimes.

 

Anyway, these guys are from a parody version of all the characters from my game. If I ever make these into something, it be in some kind of satirical, parody comic of ..some kind. The story wouldn't be serious, but like would the bad guys will act like it is, but you'll see what I mean if I ever draw it. The style is more westernized, and I can't mess it up since I was drawing this kind of style a long time ago. Sometimes I think about just replacing the characters in Rayburst with these designs. I had these in my head for a long while, but I just never got time to draw it. Their personalities are different for most of the parody versions. The Designs aren't final, I might have to tweak them some more.

 

http://i.imgur.com/qVotHUf.jpg

 

http://i.imgur.com/sGFBYV4.jpg

Edited April 19, 2016 by Fragrant

[YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR]

interesting

[Fragrant]

Thanks, the Phreit Nor and Ritrika where finished then and there, but the other two needed work. I still haven't implemented their "species" motif, which for the girl is a "doll", and the knight is either a living armor, metal person, or robot, but I will add details that will make that stand out later maybe.

 

http://i.imgur.com/7RkT5aU.jpg

 

Type A I might go with, Type B is when I draw faster, so their head shape comes out differently. Might combine A and B, but might just stay with A.

 

The design for the girl is a mix of the original, ancient, prototype from like 10 years ago of a similar character{with the same hairstyle}, and Princess from Rayburst. The Knight, I figured out his personality, and it's one nobody else has had so far. The girl's personality is kind of funny, I just need to practice writing both their lines.

 

Their names are Gofreddo and Penelope, but it's tentative. I might rename the Phreit Nor and Ritrika equivalents later, but Phreit Nor name might be passed down to this new character{and his rival, Dual Bolton as well.}

 

This new thing is a mostly a comedy, which is why I gotta make their designs fit.

 

Okay, finally colored them. Had some alternate colors, but I think these are the best.

 

http://cd8ba0b44a15c10065fd-24461f391e20b7336331d5789078af53.r23.cf1.rackcdn.com/gamesalad.vanillaforums.com/editor/i1/7lrkv7m5o9k0.jpg

 

http://cd8ba0b44a15c10065fd-24461f391e20b7336331d5789078af53.r23.cf1.rackcdn.com/gamesalad.vanillaforums.com/editor/0h/ns4g6vg9o0r2.jpg

 

I'll make both a game and comic about this universe. The game itself will be slower paced than Rayburst, or should I say "normal paced" since Rayburst speeds are probably too much for casual gamers to handle.

[Nomrah]

That tired girl is a neat design.

[Fragrant]

Nomrah: Thanks! She's smarter than she looks, and eccentric too.

 

Anyways, new art:

http://cd8ba0b44a15c10065fd-24461f391e20b7336331d5789078af53.r23.cf1.rackcdn.com/gamesalad.vanillaforums.com/editor/7g/z5x7btwasz2y.jpg

 

I'm gonna mix and parody stuff. The girl is weird, for example, when the town of fruit and vegetable people are being attacked by "Inflatons" {those freaky giants that look like people}, she's on the edge of the wall, eating popcorn{which she says she will do early in the story.} To get a good idea of dialogue, the sketch you see where she's holding a mushroom, she's saying "See this shroom, it eats dirt, and it grows, all things have a purpose, even if it's unpleasant." "As for the knight, I'm still working on his dialogue, I got his personality down, but I'm still deciding on some stuff about it, although you can get a rough idea from the sketches above. He doesn't take poop from nobody you might say. I'm wondering if I should make him the type that doesn't hide what he thinks.

 

The intro scene is funny, I pat myself on the back for thinking up something funny. You'll see what I mean.And the invasion of those inflatons doesn't happen until sometime after.

 

The egg dude is the king of the fruit and vegetable people. How he's defeated is hidden within the sketch.

 

As for the gunslinger based off Phreit Nor, I'm still thinking how he's introduced into the story. IN a scene, he's called in to investigate a gruesome triple vegiecide, where the culprit tried to create a gruesome salad from these vegetable people. Gunslinger figures out some stuff that leads him to the planet where the inflatons are on. The plot behind this vegetable and fruit massacre is because somebody from the league of greed is trying to get rich by processing veg and fruit people, and selling their products on other planets. I know it's spoilers, but it might change by the time it's drawn, but those aren't all the spoilers, just a general one though, and you can see the guy in the sketch too, posing next to these inflatons. {Their weakness is a parody of aot giants, but it's a rubber thing that if broken, deflates them. With it, they are able to regenerate and inflate back to shape no matter what damage they take.

 

Dragons will come in later, the PseudoDragons will be slightly redesigned, and the technology that makes them will be related to the inflatons, in that their not alive, but have all the stats and powers of a dragon and where invented by the league of greed to sell to Dragon Forces to increase their numbers.

 

Hopefully, nobody finds these minor spoilers when I post the comics and stuff.

 

The story is mostly comedy anyway, and the major spoilers I haven't revealed, so it should be good.

 

EDIT:

Some more re-designs of archetypes for the new game. As for the gryphon guy, since he never really appeared in Rayburst, and since his design fits many different styles, I don't think I'll change him, he'll appear in this story similar to his last design.

 

The same deal with the dragon, but I took this chance to change some details, basically I just gave him hair, since some european dragons have hair, and his "eyebrow" scales are now spikes. The feline girl, I changed the way I draw her, she has a more spherical design now, and it fits pretty well in this kind of story. The ice girl looks funky, which fits the new style, the ogre might need some more adjustments, but otherwise, close to what I had in mind. There are other ogre characters in this story, using designs similar to past ogre drawings, since I want different ogres for this.

 

http://cd8ba0b44a15c10065fd-24461f391e20b7336331d5789078af53.r23.cf1.rackcdn.com/gamesalad.vanillaforums.com/editor/uo/ajn1yjc5z50c.jpg

 

http://cd8ba0b44a15c10065fd-24461f391e20b7336331d5789078af53.r23.cf1.rackcdn.com/gamesalad.vanillaforums.com/editor/yw/8xlsam9u9swg.jpg

 

EDIT2:

 

Finished the design for the ogre, and added their weapons. Unlike the previous version, his giant bat is nearly as tall as him, instead of being 3/4ths his height. The Yuki-onna design turned out as good as the last while still being different. The bow is finally true to the society that made the Yuki-Onna legend/myth.

 

http://i.imgur.com/Vo19N7U.jpg

 

NEW EDIT:

 

Finished{EDIT: Forgot to take off those eyebrows, he looks weird with it.}:

 

EDIT FINAL: Fixed his face, added detail to the bat.

http://i.imgur.com/hHywdNa.png

Edited May 2, 2016 by Fragrant

[YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR]

i think i like the redesigns of the ogre and yuki-onna better, they just seem more inspired

 

good work

 

the dragon looks funny with hair to me

 

i think both the ogre and the dragon guy i might make in dark souls tho lol

[Fragrant]

Thanks, I've been wanting to make these redesigns for weeks.

 

Here is a full sketch of the dragon and feline. Dragon's name might be Drakota.

 

http://i.imgur.com/knC5JDS.png

 

Awesome that your making them in Dark Souls. I made the dragon and ogre back in DS1. What a good coincidence that the Dragon Fist weapon existed.

 

EDIT: And yeah, he does kind of look strange with the hair. I gotta figure out how to make it look good and not "wut".

Edited May 2, 2016 by Fragrant

[YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR]

any reason u went with hair instead of no hair?

[Fragrant]

Mostly, so that when he powers up, his hair turns into fire hair, and also as homage to the Warcraft 2 dragon, with their flowing head of hair. {Never played the later games like WoW}. In fact the whole Dragon vs Gryphon thing is homage to that Metzen art I saw back in the 90s while playing W2: tides of darkness{so many epic loading and menu screens}.

http://gameswalls.com/wallpapers/w/warcraft-2/gryphon-vs-dragon-1.jpg

 

Anyways, I forgot to mention, that I've already been drawing a comic about this, each episode is 5 pages. Episode 3 was going to be more than that, and end at a cliffhanger, but I thought where it ended at the 5 page mark was okay.

 

Starts at episode 1: Eat or be Eaten{Snce a theme of this parody is "survival of the fittest".

https://tapastic.com/episode/342826

 

Main page:

https://tapastic.com/dashboard/series/update/33459

[YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR]

i dont see hair on the dragon there lol am i missing something?

 

ill read the comics in a bit!

 

k read it it was fun the faces were especially good lol

[Fragrant]

Thank you! And I haven't even gotten to the good part yet! I was wondering if I put enough humor in it. This comic is also to hone my inking skills, so I'll be experimenting with different line types.

 

For some reason, only the in-game sprite and icon have the drago with hair, but you know how stuff changes through out game development, lol.

http://www.thanatosrealms.com/war2/images/horde-units/dragon-2.gif

 

Dragon and Gryphon sprites in action from that game, even now, those graphics are still high quality stuff.

http://www.mobygames.com/images/shots/l/64535-warcraft-ii-tides-of-darkness-dos-screenshot-orcs-have-dragons.gif

 

http://www.mobygames.com/images/shots/l/64528-warcraft-ii-tides-of-darkness-dos-screenshot-a-bunch-of-dragons.gif

 

http://home.intranet.org/~tdh/war_strategy/gifs/orules2.gif

[Fragrant]

Episode 4:

https://tapastic.com/episode/347495

[YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR]

veggie attack on titan lol

[Fragrant]

Yeah, I'm gonna try to parody a lot of anime stuff, lol.

[Fragrant]

This sketch is turning 10 years old.

 

http://i.imgur.com/tdGiBFx.png

 

That's like the original princess character that I've ever used, but unlike future princesses, she wasn't happy go lucky or hyper. She was gritty and dressed like a peasant. The other girls on the right and through out the page are similar looking characters.

[YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR]

the bow guy is super interesting

 

the princess isnt tbh

[Fragrant]

True, although this is from 10 years ago, lol. I felt like taking a look at some old art and found this. That princess looks like she hasn't even slept.

 

Those two bow people are girls, which are the two up above the armors. There are some knight men who got some cool designs I should post later, drawn from this year too. Like this guy who fights with a two handed sword one handed, while keeping another 2 hander in a sheath on his back, locked in chains since once unsheated, unleashes destructive energy or something, I should use a design like that again.

 

Some sketches from No-Edge, the first page of episode 5 and 6 respectively. Although I haven't had time to work on it.

http://i.imgur.com/B2mJIpe.png

 

The Princess of this new comic reminded me a lot of the Princess from 10 years ago. So I went looking for the sketch of her to see just how much the resemblance was, lol. I think back then, the latest AC was Nexus or Ninebreaker.

[YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR]

lol

[Fragrant]

Anyways, I've finished that game I was working on.

 

It's on google play:

https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.fulgryph.rayburstGP

 

And Amazon store:

http://www.amazon.com/Fulgryph-Rayburst/dp/B01G5U97Z2/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1464731133&sr=8-1&keywords=rayburst

 

Wasn't able to make the iOS version in time, I'm out of money for development, so I'll have to come back to it when I'm financially stable.

 

I updated the main site a little too.

http://www.rayburst.net/

 

If you are on iOS, html5 version is playable, but it's only available as a demo.

 

I guess from now till financial stability, I'll just practice a few black and white art pages in my spare time, or 3D experiments, not sure, or probably just do freelancing all the time now.

[Py687]

The old princess is the sleepy looking one on the right, yeah? I like her a lot. Those are the eyes of a leader.

 

I'll give your mobile game a spin very soon.

[Fragrant]

@Bae Yeah, well, she's based on the old princess, but not really her. True, she does have good leadership skills.

 

Thanks about the mobile game, I actually made a new trailer for it too, only part of the start is the same as the old trailer, but some new stuff, like a demonstration of Phreit Nor's decoy shell:

[YUNG MASTERLESS GLENCOUR]

what was ur dragonguy's name again?

 

did he even have a name?

[Fragrant]

You mean the fighting Dragon that knows martial arts? EDIT: Sorry, I wrote his name in this space, but accidentally deleted it when I pasted the pics on here. It's Drakota.

 

http://i.imgur.com/h9w4z1h.jpg

 

http://i.imgur.com/knC5JDS.png

 

His moveset would be sorta like a Shoto from SF, with a dragon uppercut, hadouken made of fire, but some other moves like a straight fire punch and a flame stream.

 

Since I never used him in Rayburst, I guess I will use his hairless design in No-Edge if Rayburst falls, although it looks like it's picking up. Not quite sure though, lol.

Edited June 2, 2016 by Fragrant